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What do you do when you have a tough time reaching your goal? Answer in a few sentences.

When I am struggle with reaching my goal, I just keep trying to achieve my goal. pursuing to accomplish goals is kind of tricky things. but one thing I can say is just keep going when he or she encounters a tough time in their life. never give up.....

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Hi Kyeong Mi!

I am so inspired by your thoughts about reaching goals amidst struggle. After all, we all struggle everyday. Sometimes, it doesn't matter what kind the struggle is. It matters how we deal with the struggle and the patience of overcoming it.

So stay tough, hang in there, and go for your dreams!

Thank you for this very good answer!

See you next week!

-T. Donna =)

When I am struggle with reaching my goal, I just keep trying to achieve my goal. 
>>  When I am struggling with reaching my goal, I just keep trying to achieve my goal (it). 

pursuing to accomplish goals is kind of tricky things. 
>> Pursuing to accomplish goals is kind of tricky things/ kind of a tricky thing. 

but one thing I can say is just keep going when he or she encounters a tough time in their life. never give up.....
>> But one thing I can say is just to keep going when he or she encounters a tough time in his/her life and never give up.
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