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I think my dad is the healthiest person I know.
He does 3 kinds of exercises everyday. First he does some muscular exercises, especially he spends many times for his core muscle.
Next he cycles at home for 30 minutes every day. Lastly he walk 10,000 steps everyday.
If it¡¯s raining he goes up and down stairs at home.
He never skip any of the exercises.

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Hi Jinny!
You did well this week.
I hope you have a great weekend!
~~ Teacher Sharon
I think my dad is the healthiest person I know.
>> Correct
He does 3 kinds of exercises everyday. 
>> Correct
First he does some muscular exercises, especially he spends many times for his core muscle.
>> First he does some exercises for the muscles and he especially spends much time on his core muscles.
Next he cycles at home for 30 minutes every day. 
>> Correct
Lastly he walk 10,000 steps everyday.
>> Lastly he walks 10,000 steps everyday.
If it¡¯s raining he goes up and down stairs at home.
>> If it¡¯s raining he goes up and down the stairs at home.
He never skip any of the exercises.
>> He never skips any of the exercises.
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