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Strong Power of Body Language

작성자: 정*경
2021-10-24 423

회원님의 영작문

Body language is crucial because verbal action requires at least a few seconds to deliver one’s emotion while non-verbal action can do it in a second. When there are two people using different languages, you can think that they cannot communicate since they speak different languages. However, they can still communicate with each other using facial expression and gestures with hands and body. It is interesting that the usage of certain body languages often times deliver the quite similar meaning cross the countries. Sometimes body language even can portray the hidden meaning. You can think that a person is depressed by looking at his/her timid and anxious face. You may ask him/her whether something is wrong or not. The person replies that nothing is wrong and everything is going okay. In this case, her body language could be saying the truth while her verbal language helped him/her to pretend like everything is okay.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Su! Thank you for doing your homework. You were able to use good expressions. Great job!

- Debbie

Body language is crucial because verbal action requires at least a few seconds to deliver one’s emotion while non-verbal action can do it in a second. 
>> Body language is crucial because a verbal action requires at least a few seconds to deliver one’s message while a non-verbal action can do it in a second. 

When there are two people using different languages, you can think that they cannot communicate since they speak different languages. 
>> This is a good sentence.

However, they can still communicate with each other using facial expression and gestures with hands and body. 
>> However, they can still communicate with each other using facial expressions and gestures. 
 
It is interesting that the usage of certain body languages often times deliver the quite similar meaning cross the countries. 
>>  It is interesting that the usage of a specific body language oftentimes delivers quite a similar meaning across the countries. 

Sometimes body language even can portray the hidden meaning. 
>> Sometimes body language can even reveal someone's feelings. 

You can think that a person is depressed by looking at his/her timid and anxious face. 
>> You can tell that a person is depressed by looking at his timid and anxious face. 

You may ask him/her whether something is wrong or not.
>> You may ask him whether there is something wrong.

The person replies that nothing is wrong and everything is going okay. 
>> The person replies that nothing is wrong, and everything is okay.

In this case, her body language could be saying the truth while her verbal language helped him/her to pretend like everything is okay.
>> In this case, his body language could be telling the truth, while his verbal language helped him to pretend that everything was okay.
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