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What is the hardest problem you have ever faced in your life?

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What is the hardest problem you have ever faced in your life? Explain brief.

I think that I don¡¯t have ever faced the hardest problem in my life.
Sometimes, there are faced up to an unexpected, but I am good at overcoming situation without difficulty.
My life has been smoothing until now.
I wish that it was same like now.

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Hi Monica:)

Challenges and problems are important parts of life that give you experiences, make you learn and help you to become wiser and stronger. Problems make us grow and shape us. The biggest problem people have is that they hope for a life without problems. Regardless of the result, value the experience and personal growth.

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

I think that I don¡¯t have ever faced the hardest problem in my life.
>> I don't think I have ever experiences the hardest problem in my life yet. 

Sometimes, there are faced up to an unexpected, but I am good at overcoming situation without difficulty.
>> Sometimes there are unexpected problems but I am good in overcoming different situations without difficulty. 

My life has been smoothing until now.
>> My life has been running smooth until now. 

I wish that it was same like now. 
>> I wish it would remain the same. 
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