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What worst disease or sickness made you go to the hospital?

--> I am a relatively healthy person. It's hard to remember that I went to the hospital because I was sick.
The last time I went to the hospital because of my sickness was when I caught the flu about two years ago.
The flu was so strong and painful that I am still very careful not to catch the flu and care about vaccination every year.

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Hi there Bo Im!

I understand that kind of situation. Having flu can be so painful and hamper you from doing anything. So that was a very good decision to go to the hospital. Anyway, Please go over your two sentences below for some suggestions.

Stay healthy and see you in class in less than an hour!

-T. Donna =)

I am a relatively healthy person.
>> Correct!

 It's hard to remember that I went to the hospital because I was sick.
>> Correct!

The last time I went to the hospital because of my sickness was when I caught the flu about two years ago.
>> The last time I went to the hospital was because of my sickness when I caught flu about two years ago.

The flu was so strong and painful that I am still very careful not to catch the flu and care about vaccination every year.
>> Correct!
Or: The flu was so strong and painful that I am still very careful not to catch it, thus, I have to care about vaccination every year.
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