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Do you like travelling? Why?

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Yes, I love traveling. Because I love watch watching something and going around. Especially new place!!
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What is the best part of today's class in your school?

Eyebrow shapes sketch was beautiful in my school, today!
Because teacher said My sketch was better than other people who was first time in my academic. So it¡¯s makes my feel better!

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Hi Mun!

Thank you very much for doing the previous homework! Being in a new place make us feel there are so many things we can learn.

Meanwhile, congratulations today! It didn't matter that you miss some minutes of our class because you drew the perfect eye brows in your academy! Well done! I am so proud of you! So study hard and refine your skills to the best that you can.

Tell me more about your academy when I see you soon!

-T. Donna =)

Yes, I love traveling. Because I love watch watching something and going around. Especially new place!!
>> Yes, I love traveling because I love watching something and going around especially in a new place!
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>> This was last time's answer. It didn¡¯t write it here before.

What is the best part of today's class in your school?

Eyebrow shapes sketch was beautiful in my school, today!
>> Correct!
Because teacher said My sketch was better than other people who was first time in my academic. So it¡¯s makes my feel better!
>> Because teacher said, my sketch was better than the other people who did this for the first time in my academy. So it made me feel better!
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