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1. David Sarnoff said: "Competition brings out the best in products and the worst in people." What does this mean? Do you agree?

Competition works defferently depending on its level and each people. Adequate competition can motivate people, and brings great output. And in capitalistic market, thanks to competition we can choose better product. But when it goes extremely, people could feel tired and overwhelmed. And sometimes they can feel helplessness. I'm not a competitive person. So I want to focus on my own development rather than comparison with others.

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Good evening, Yu Jeong! 

Thank you for answering the homework question. Please take note of the comments/ suggestions below: 

Question: David Sarnoff said: "Competition brings out the best in products and the worst in people." What does this mean? Do you agree?

Your Answer: Competition works defferently depending on its level and each people. Adequate competition can motivate people, and brings great output. And in capitalistic market, thanks to competition we can choose better product. But when it goes extremely, people could feel tired and overwhelmed. And sometimes they can feel helplessness. I'm not a competitive person. So I want to focus on my own development rather than comparison with others.

>> Competition works differently depending on its level and each person. Adequate competition can motivate people, and bring great output. In a capitalistic market, thanks to competition we can choose better product. But when it goes to extremes, people could feel tired and overwhelmed and sometimes they can feel helpless. I'm not a competitive person. I want to focus on my own development rather than compare myself with others. 

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