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작성자: 류*선
2021-10-27 476

회원님의 영작문

I have made lots of assumptions. I assume how my wife feels. I assume how people feel. I assume how they think of me. I assume over and over. Yet, is what I assume true? No. My assumption is accepted by myself as true without proof. That is a funny point of it. For instance, when we make mistake we believe that it is offensive to others. Then assume that they must be angry because of the mistake we make. Unless they say true we don't really know that whether it is true or not. It comes from our personal experiences or cultural background. So the assumption is not about others. It is a mirror of myself. Sometimes assumptions without proof and confirmation from others can grow as anxiety and fear. It is bad side of our assumption. Jesus says, You will know the truth, and the truth will set you free. To be free from my assumption, I must know the truth. God and His word are truth. Once we rely on this truth first rather than assumption, freedom is ours which world can never give. Amen!

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Amen and amen to that, Han! I also believe that all human weaknesses should be surrendered to Jesus! Thank you for sharing your inner thoughts!-Faith-
I have made lots of assumptions. 
>> CORRECT
I assume how my wife feels. 
>> CORRECT
I assume how people feel. 
>> CORRECT
I assume how they think of me. 
>> CORRECT
I assume over and over. 
>> CORRECT
OR I assume time after time.
Yet, is what I assume true? 
>> CORRECT
OR Is my assumption true?
No. 
>> CORRECT
OR No, it isn't.
My assumption is accepted by myself as true without proof. 
>> CORRECT
OR I also believe my perceptions are true.
That is a funny point of it. 
>> CORRECT
For instance, when we make mistake we believe that it is offensive to others. 
>> For instance, when we make a mistake, we believe that it is offensive to others. 
Then assume that they must be angry because of the mistake we make. 
>> Then, we assume that they must be angry because of the mistake we make. 
Unless they say true we don't really know that whether it is true or not. 
>> Unless they say so, we don't really know whether it is true or not. 
It comes from our personal experiences or cultural background. So the assumption is not about others. 
>> It comes from our personal experiences or cultural background so the assumption is not about others. 
It is a mirror of myself. 
>> CORRECT
Sometimes assumptions without proof and confirmation from others can grow as anxiety and fear. 
>> CORRECT
It is bad side of our assumption.
>> It is the bad side of our assumption.
Jesus says, You will know the truth, and the truth will set you free. 
>> Jesus says, "You will know the truth, and the truth will set you free. "
To be free from my assumption, I must know the truth. 
>> To be free from my assumptions, I must know the truth. 
God and His word are truth. 
>> CORRECT
Once we rely on this truth first rather than assumption, freedom is ours which world can never give. 
>> Once we rely on this truth first rather than making assumptions, freedom is ours which the world can never give. 
Amen!
>> CORRECT
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