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When you hear from others that you are worthless or ugly, don't take it seriously. It is a lie. When a thought comes up in your mind that you are useless or little don't believe it as true. It is not a truth either. Those words and beliefs don't come from your creator.
Or when someone says you're special, don't be arrogant or believe so. God never says you are special but you are a unique creation. You're not better or worse than others since God's grace and love reach every single person in the world. It means all people are evenly and inclusively loved by God. Nothing, not-a-thing, can separate us from God's love.Don't undermine or exaggerate yourself. Don't waste your time thinking about it. Ask and try to find what the purpose of your life is about. Your creator will let you know. Once you convince it then do and follow the purpose of your life. You will live out life, also you can light a small candle to shine in a room. You will find who you are and the purpose of your life. Amen

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That's on point, Han! It's really hard to live a meaningless life! Thank you for sharing!-Faith-
When you hear from others that you are worthless or ugly, don't take it seriously. 
>>  CORRECT
It is a lie. 
>>  CORRECT
When a thought comes up in your mind that you are useless or little don't believe it as true. 
>>  CORRECT
It is not a truth either. 
>> It is not the truth either. 
OR It's neither the truth.
Those words and beliefs don't come from your creator.
>> Those words and beliefs don't come from your Creator.
Or when someone says you're special, don't be arrogant or believe so. 
>>  CORRECT
God never says you are special but you are a unique creation. 
>>  CORRECT
You're not better or worse than others since God's grace and love reach every single person in the world. 
>>  CORRECT
It means all people are evenly and inclusively loved by God. 
>>  CORRECT
OR It means that we are justly loved by God.
Nothing, not-a-thing, can separate us from God's love.
>> Nothing, not a thing, can separate us from God's love.
Don't undermine or exaggerate yourself. 
>>  CORRECT
Don't waste your time thinking about it. 
>>  CORRECT
OR Don't dwell on it.
Ask and try to find what the purpose of your life is about. 
>> Ask and try to find what the purpose of your life is. 
Your creator will let you know. 
>> Your Creator will let you know. 
Once you convince it then do and follow the purpose of your life. 
>> Once you are convinced by it then do and follow the purpose of your life. 
You will live out life, also you can light a small candle to shine in a room. 
>> You will live out your life serving Him, also you can light a small candle to shine in a room. 
You will find who you are and the purpose of your life. 
>>  CORRECT
Amen
>>  Amen.
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