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1. How often do you go camping?
I go camping every three months.

2. What are the top five things that you should bring
when you go camping?
You need to bring when you go camping are tents, blankets, backpacks, food, hats.

1. What was the best Christmas present you have received?
My favorite Christmas gift was a doll.

2. Do you like wearing matching outfits in your country?
Korea likes to wear clothes that go well.

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Hi Emma:)

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

1. How often do you go camping?
I go camping every three months.
>> CORRECT

2. What are the top five things that you should bring
when you go camping?
You need to bring when you go camping are tents, blankets, backpacks, food, hats.
>> The things you need to bring when you go camping are tents, blankets, backpacks, food and hats. 

1. What was the best Christmas present you have received?
My favorite Christmas gift was a doll.
>> The Christmas gift I want to receive is a doll. 

2. Do you like wearing matching outfits in your country?
Korea likes to wear clothes that go well.
>> Koreans like to well clothes that go well on them. 
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