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I think in my country most common vegetable is galic.
Because it goes into almost food.
And Korean likes galic so many home have galic.
And most common fruit is tangerine.
Because in my country winter many people like tangerine at home.

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Good day, Chaeyeong!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

I think in my country most common vegetable is galic.
>> I think in my country, the most common vegetable is garlic.
Because it goes into almost food.
>> It's because it goes into most food.
And Korean likes galic so many home have galic.
>>  Koreans like garlic, so many people have garlic in their homes.
And most common fruit is tangerine.
>> And for fruits, the most common fruit is tangerine.
Because in my country winter many people like tangerine at home.
>> That's because in my country, in winter, many people like eating tangerines at home.
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