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I have ever read the newspapers about the difficulties of company managers.
>>> I have ever read the on the newspaper about the difficulties of company managers.
They hired young people who graduated engineering colleges.
>>>  They hired young people who graduated from engineering colleges.
Although they had many certificates anf licenses but they didn't have practical ablility in the field of their majors.
>>> Although they had many certificates and licenses but they don't have a practical ability in the field of their majors
>>> Although they acquire different certificates and licenses, they still don't have a practical ability that can be useful in their field of specialization.
The reason is that we regard as important fators the score and licebse that we can see.
>>>The reason is that we regard scores and licenses as important factors.
We live in a society that makes each other hard and contest.
>>> We live in a society that makes hard for other to compete. 
>>> We are living in a society that makes each other compete
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