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why kids will helping parent\'s chores.

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I think kids will helping that parent's chores.
That is because the work can done early.
My second reason is we can exercise to do chores.
My third reason is get parent's love.
Finally, when we get adult, we will do house chores.

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Hi, Joey! Thank you for doing your homework. Please keep it up to improve your writing skills. 

- Teacher Debbie


I think kids will helping that parent's chores.
>> I think kids should help their parents with chores.

That is because the work can done early.
>> When we help with chores, they can be finished early.

My second reason is we can exercise to do chores.
>> The second reason is we can exercise when we do chores.

My third reason is get parent's love.
>> The third reason is our parents will love us more.

Finally, when we get adult, we will do house chores.
>> Finally, when we become adults, we will do house chores, too.
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