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회원님의 영작문

1. What song brings a lot of good memories to you?

'How far I go' this song is one of the sound track of Moana which is disney movie. I love this movie. And when it released, I was having hard time to adjust a hospital as a new nurse. I lost my confidence and felt myself useless, hopeless. At that time, The movie comforted me a lot. I didn't expect that I can come this far way.(as a experienced nurse) Even though I still have to go far away from here.

2. What songs are currently in your playlist? What is the mood of this playlist?

I have songs from Lala land, disney movies in my playlist. I like this kind of songs. Because these are not heavy, but always have meanings. And I like cheerful, upbeat melody as well.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good evening, Yu Jeong! 

Thank you for answering the questions. Please take note of the comments below: 

1. What song brings a lot of good memories to you?

Your Answer: 'How far I go' this song is one of the sound track of Moana which is disney movie. I love this movie. And when it released, I was having hard time to adjust a hospital as a new nurse. I lost my confidence and felt myself useless, hopeless. At that time, The movie comforted me a lot. I didn't expect that I can come this far way.(as a experienced nurse) Even though I still have to go far away from here.

>> The song that brings a lot of good memories to me is the song, 'How far I Go.' This song is one of the sound tracks of Moana which is a Disney movie. I love this movie. When it was released, I was having hard time adjusting to  the hospital as a new nurse. I lost my confidence and felt useless and hopeless. This movie comforted me a lot during those times. I didn't expect that I can come this far (as an experienced nurse), and I know that I still have a long way to go from here. 

[ Songs are very powerful indeed. They have the power to motivate us even in our darkest times. :)]



2. What songs are currently in your playlist? What is the mood of this playlist?

Your Answer: I have songs from Lala land, disney movies in my playlist. I like this kind of songs. Because these are not heavy, but always have meanings. And I like cheerful, upbeat melody as well.

>> I have songs from Lalaland and from Disney movies in my playlist. I like these kinds of songs, because these songs are not heavy, but they are always meaningful, and I like cheerful, upbeat melodies as well. 

[ I don't know if you listen to Taylor Swift, but if you do, I like her songs Mean and Shake It Off, especially. They are my pull-me up songs! :) ]

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Great work! See you later in class! 


~Miya^^
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