무료 레벨테스트 받고 강사평가 남기면 1,OOO원 쿠폰 즉시 적립!

혹시 사이트에선 찾지 못한 궁금한 점이 있으세요?
남겨주신 이메일을 통해 답변 드리겠습니다.

문의하신 내용이 문자로 발송되오니
연락처를 남겨주세요.
업무시간 월~금 오전9시~오후6시
(점심시간 낮12시~오후1시)

영작교정 게시판

영어 말하기와 쓰기를 동시에 잡는다!

자신 있게 쓸 수 있는 영작문을 위해 파워잉글리쉬 수업을 수강하시는
회원님들께 무료로 제공해드리는 부가 서비스로, 전문 분야를 제외한 자유 주제
또는 강사님이 내주시는 과제를 회원님께서 영어로 작성해주시면,
담당 강사 님께서 ‘문법 오류 교정’ 과 ‘더 나은 영어식 표현’으로 교정해주는
서비스 입니다.

Have you ever volunteered to help victims of natural disasters? Why or why not?

작성자: 선*
2021-10-31 381

회원님의 영작문

Yes, I have. Several years ago, we had an oil spill incident when a huge oil ship was crashed with a sea crane. The oil tank of the oil ship was broken and oil flew out all over the sea at a moment. All the area was covered with spilled oil and became black. On top of that, most sea creatures were found dead near the seashore. That area is one of the popular leisure attractions, and many businesses ran there, too. If the sea were useless, people who made a living by the sea would lose their jobs. Experts said that oil covered with the sea was not easily cleared away and then took several years to remove it completely. When we watched the news, all of us hoped to run there at that moment and help them. Actually, it took more than four years to recover the sea, and locals had difficulty overcoming the disasters. But all of us worked together to make the sea restored soon.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

HI Sun Jung, thank you for this. Have a great day!
Jasmin 

Yes, I have. Several years ago, we had an oil spill incident when a huge oil ship was crashed with a sea crane. 
>>Yes, I have. Several years ago. We had an oil spill incident when a huge oil ship crashed into a sea crane. 
The oil tank of the oil ship was broken and oil flew out all over the sea at a moment.
>>The oil tank of the oil ship was broken and oil spilled out all over the sea. 
 All the area was covered with spilled oil and became black. 
>>All the area were covered with oil and it became black.
On top of that, most sea creatures were found dead near the seashore.
>> On top of that, most sea creatures were found dead near the seashore. 
 That area is one of the popular leisure attractions, and many businesses ran there, too.
>>That area is one of the most popular leisure attractions and there were many businesses there too. 
 If the sea were useless, people who made a living by the sea would lose their jobs. 
>>A lot  of people who makes a living in the sea would lose their jobs. 
Experts said that oil covered with the sea was not easily cleared away and then took several years to remove it completely. 
>>Experts said that the sea covered with oil cannot be easily clear or removed. 
When we watched the news, all of us hoped to run there at that moment and help them. 
>>When we watched the news, we all wanted to volunteer to help and clean the sea. 
Actually, it took more than four years to recover the sea, and locals had difficulty overcoming the disasters. 
>>It took four years to recover the sea and locals struggled with their lives for quite some time. 
But all of us worked together to make the sea restored soon.
>But all of us worked together to restore the sea to how it was before. 
번호 제목 글쓴이 공개 상태 등록일 조회수
112741 Monday homework 류*우 완료 2021-10-11 303
112740 What is the hardest part of being a student? 류*주 완료 2021-10-11 340
112739 How did people keep in touch with friends in the past, before... 김*환 완료 2021-10-11 316
112738 Do you think the university entrance examination test is really... 황*하 완료 2021-10-11 351
112737 Homework 강*선 완료 2021-10-11 332
112736 Cartoons 기*현 완료 2021-10-11 307
112735 Eating Chocolate in the Morning Helps Reduce Appetite 유*진 완료 2021-10-11 2
112734 How was your meeting today? Answer in a few sentences. 김*묵 완료 2021-10-11 334
112733 Economics for Kids 유*진 완료 2021-10-11 1
112732 HOMEWORK: Choose the right word. 전*영 완료 2021-10-11 338
112731 Homework 김*혁 완료 2021-10-11 338
112730 Howework 권*수 완료 2021-10-11 1
112729 Does it annoy you when shop assistants try to sell you things... 노*이 완료 2021-10-11 1
112728 What are the things you\'re going to do when you retire? 김*호 완료 2021-10-11 349
112727 What is the importance of getting vaccinated especially during a... 황*하 완료 2021-10-11 341
112726 I don\'t have any idea:( 이*은 완료 2021-10-11 317
112725 Nick name 윤*진 완료 2021-10-11 2
112724 What drink do you often have but best avoided? 서*영 완료 2021-10-11 368
112723 why I don\'t have long hair 김*성 완료 2021-10-11 337
112722 Do you consider yourself a creative person? Why? 권*윤 완료 2021-10-10 402

HOW TO USE IT?

[마이페이지 > 수업 내용 보기 > 학습 캘린더 > 영작교정 버튼 클릭]

수업 횟수만큼 영작교정 게시판이 생성되며,
지난 날짜에도 게시 할 수 있습니다.

주5회 수업 : 월 20회 이용 가능
주3회 수업 : 월 12회 이용 가능
주2회 수업 : 월 08회 이용 가능
01
교정 내용은 최대 1,000byte까지 올릴 수 있습니다.

첨부 파일은 원활한 첨삭을 위한 참고자료로 사용될 뿐,
파일에 대한 첨삭은 불가능 합니다.

업로드 가능한 첨부 파일은 최대 2mb까지이며,
첨부 할 수 있는 파일 형식은 다음과 같습니다.

문서 - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
이미지 - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
전문 분야를 제외한 회원님이 직접 작성한 글만
첨삭이 가능하며,

올려주신 글의 강사님 첨삭은 24시간 이내에
완료 되는 것을 원칙으로 하고 있습니다.
03
하루 게시 가능한 글은 3회까지 이며,
종료된 수업의 영작교정 게시판은
이용이 어려운 점 양해 부탁 드립니다.
04

와이즈에듀케이션아이(주) 사이트명: 파워잉글리쉬 대표이사 전상현
사업자등록번호: 217-81-44736 통신판매신고번호: 2014-서울도봉-0233호
서울본사: 서울시 노원구 한글비석로 245 두타빌 B동 7층 713호
대표번호 1688-8672 개인정보관리 책임자: 안희영 [powerenglish@pweng.net]