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회원님의 영작문

This is not an astounding result from much researches. The main difference between Asperger's syndrome and autism is that the delay in language development is not noticeable and perceived and the intellectual ability is fairly good. Because of these characteristics, if there is no meticulous observation and monitoring, it may not be diagnosed until adolescence or adulthood. At a young age, Dylan was diagnosed with Asperger Syndrome. Dylan’s parents were not skeptical, but they were very proactive and rigorous in working closely with Dylan. His education team and his doctors were the best and brightest. They helped him get diagnosed early. . Dylan created an animated PowerPoint presentation about Asperger and how it affects him. After Dylan’s presentation, his classmates regretted and quit bullying him. And Dylan tried to forget what his classmates has done. Dylan’s fifth grade teacher rendered Dylan the opportunity to address the class about Asperger Syndrome.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Goodnight, Jane! I know you can make it tomorrow. Just be confident and focus on your topic. See you!-Faith-
This is not an astounding result from much researches. 
>> This is not an astounding result from a lot of research. 
The main difference between Asperger's syndrome and autism is that the delay in language development is not noticeable and perceived and the intellectual ability is fairly good. 
>> CORRECT
Because of these characteristics, if there is no meticulous observation and monitoring, it may not be diagnosed until adolescence or adulthood. 
>> CORRECT
At a young age, Dylan was diagnosed with Asperger Syndrome. 
>> CORRECT
Dylan’s parents were not skeptical, but they were very proactive and rigorous in working closely with Dylan. 
>> CORRECT
OR Fortunately, Dylan’s parents were not skeptical, but they were very proactive and rigorous in working closely with Dylan. 
His education team and his doctors were the best and brightest. 
>> His education team and his doctors were the best and the brightest. 
They helped him get diagnosed early. .
>> They helped him get diagnosed early. 
Dylan created an animated PowerPoint presentation about Asperger and how it affects him. 
>> In class, Dylan created an animated PowerPoint presentation about Asperger and how it affects him. 
After Dylan’s presentation, his classmates regretted and quit bullying him. 
>> CORRECT
And Dylan tried to forget what his classmates has done. 
>> And Dylan tried to forget what his classmates have done. 
Dylan’s fifth grade teacher rendered Dylan the opportunity to address the class about Asperger Syndrome.
>> Dylan’s fifth grade teacher rendered Dylan the opportunity to address Asperger Syndrome to the class.
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