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1. Do you like playing out in the snow?
Yes, I like to play in the snow.

2. Is winter your favorite season?
No, my favorite season is Autumn.

1. What is the best winter sport for you?
My favorite winter sport is skating.

2. What winter sport would you like to learn?
I want to learn ski.

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Hi Emma:)

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

1. Do you like playing out in the snow?
Yes, I like to play in the snow.
>> CORRECT

2. Is winter your favorite season?
No, my favorite season is Autumn.
>> CORRECT

1. What is the best winter sport for you?
My favorite winter sport is skating.
>> CORRECT

2. What winter sport would you like to learn?
I want to learn ski.
>> I want to learn how to ski. 
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