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Homework is important because it helps us when the class is not enough to learn everything.
The time of the class is set so we usually have to study more to understand perfectly.
Sometimes teachers ask us to prepare something as a homework, because if we finish it we can understand the class easily.
Also we have to do some homework such as book report.
I think it is because we can¡¯t read a book in our class, so teachers make us read some books as a homework.

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Hi Jinny!
You got the point perfectly.
I always appreciate your efforts.
Great job!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Homework is important because it helps us when the class is not enough to learn everything.
>> Correct
The time of the class is set so we usually have to study more to understand perfectly.
>> Correct
Sometimes teachers ask us to prepare something as a homework, because if we finish it we can understand the class easily.
>> Sometimes teachers ask us to prepare something as homework because if we finish it, we can understand the class easily.
Also we have to do some homework such as book report.
>> Also we have to do some homework such as book reports.
I think it is because we can¡¯t read a book in our class, so teachers make us read some books as a homework.
>> I think it is because we can¡¯t read a book in our class, so teachers make us read some books as homework.
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