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Is it easy to forgive people for doing something bad to you? Why or why not?

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I do not think it is easy to forgive someone who do bad to me actually. But I do not like to waste of my time to blame someone. I think forgiving is for me, not other people. To be happier and enjoy our short life, we should try to do something making us better than yesterday and expecting our promising future. Of course, it is not easy because I get some heart break from my closest people such as a friend, family member or boy/girlfriend. I have gone through to break a relationship which is unhealthy. I realized I have no ability to be my people around me always. And all is changed. So I will be more open minded and understandable. Forgiving is not easy action to people but the best healing way for myself I believe.

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Hi, Kaycee! My favorite line of yours is, "I think forgiving is for myself, not for other people." I believe it's our first step to move on.-Faith-
I do not think it is easy to forgive someone who do bad to me actually. 
>> I do not think it is easy to forgive someone who did bad to me actually. 
But I do not like to waste of my time to blame someone. 
>> But I do not like to waste my time blaming someone. 
I think forgiving is for me, not other people. 
>> I think forgiving is for myself, not for other people. 
To be happier and enjoy our short life, we should try to do something making us better than yesterday and expecting our promising future. 
>> To be happier and to enjoy our short life, we should try to do something that makes us better than yesterday and expect our promising future. 
Of course, it is not easy because I get some heart break from my closest people such as a friend, family member or boy/girlfriend.
>> Of course, it is not easy because I got some heartbreaks from the people closest to me such as a friend, family member or boyfriend.
I have gone through to break a relationship which is unhealthy. 
>> I have gone through a break up, which was unhealthy. 
I realized I have no ability to be my people around me always. 
>> I realized I have no ability to be with those people around me always. 
And all is changed. 
>> And things change. 
So I will be more open minded and understandable. 
>> So, I will be more openminded and understandable. 
Forgiving is not easy action to people but the best healing way for myself I believe.
>> Forgiving is not an easy action for people but it's the best way to heal myself, I believe.
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