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What kind of people do you like to meet?

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I like to meet people who are active and who like to talking with people.
Fist of all, I like to go around and do active activities with take pictures.
However, I also like static activities such as watching movies or drams, listening to music, or go to an exhibition. And then I like sharing about these activities (like own thought or opinion) with people even more.
Sometimes it's good to meet someone new person. This is because meet new people can improve affinity and comfortably share own stories that cannot talk too close people with me. At the same time, I also like to get to know another new person.

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I like to meet people who are active and who like to talking with people.

>>I like to meet people who are active and like conversations.
Fist of all, I like to go around and do active activities with take pictures. 

>>First of all, I like to go around and do active affairs while taking pictures.
However, I also like static activities such as watching movies or drams, listening to music, or go to an exhibition.

>>However, I also enjoy static activities such as watching movies or dramas, listening to music, or going to exhibitions.

And then I like sharing about these activities (like own thought or opinion) with people even more. 

>>And then I like sharing these activities even more with some people.
Sometimes it's good to meet someone new person.

>>Sometimes, it's good to meet someone new.

This is because meet new people can improve affinity and comfortably share own stories that cannot talk too close people with me.

>>This is because meeting new people can improve affinity and relationship as I share my own stories to people who are not close to me.

At the same time, I also like to get to know another new person.

>>At the same time, I also get to know new people.


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