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Who will you vote for your president next year and why?

--> I\\\'m not sure, but maybe I\\\'ll vote for candidate Lee Jae-myung. He proved his high performance while serving as mayor of Seongnam and governor of Gyeonggi-do. In fact, the supporting rate of him is relatively high due to high expectations for his performance.

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I do not know this man very well but then since you are endorsing him as your president, I need to know more about him now. All politicians may have done something that we do not like but then, they are our leaders. Thus, we need to respect them for making policies that affected our lives positively.

Thank you for this answer in spite of your business. See you again tomorrow.

-T. Donna =)

I'm not sure, but maybe I'll vote for candidate Lee Jae-myung. 
>> Correct!
Or: I'm not sure, but maybe I'll vote for presidential candidate Lee Jae-Myung. 

He proved his high performance while serving as mayor of Seongnam and governor of Gyeonggi-do. 
>> Correct!

In fact, the supporting rate of him is relatively high due to high expectations for his performance.
>> In fact, the supporting rate for him is relatively high due to high expectations for his performance.
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