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Since it\'s Halloween season, do you think ghosts are real? Why or why not?

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Since it's Halloween season, do you think ghosts are real? Why or why not?

I have never seen a ghost.
But It's like they exist somewhere.
I will probably not see a ghost all my life.
Listening to ghosts story, I will believe in their existence.

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Hi Monica:)

Me too. I don't believe in ghosts but I am very much afraid of it. Hahaha!

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

I have never seen a ghost.
>>CORRECT

But It's like they exist somewhere.
>> But it seems that they exist somewhere. 

I will probably not see a ghost all my life.
>> I will probably not see a ghost in my entire life. 

Listening to ghosts story, I will believe in their existence.
>> When I listen to ghost stories, it makes me believe in them. 
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