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1.She wants to visit her best, gorgeous friend.
2.There was a fun,excellent birthday party.
3.Did you see that sad stray dog?
4.He will drive to his office right now.
5.They ran to the school by hurry

1.He walked over the bridge and takes a picture of himself.
2.They walked through the door to get some supplies.
3.He walked inside the house because the class was over.
4.During field trip, they went to the museum and saw fossils
5.They walked with their pet cat

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Hi Pablo! 

Thank you for doing your homework. Unfortunately, the instruction was not followed. It says that sentences should have a prepositional phrase. :) 
Corrections are given, please take time to read. 


1.She wants to visit her best, gorgeous friend.
>> She wants to visit her best friend on Friday.
 
2.There was a fun,excellent birthday party.
>> There was a party last weekend. 

3.Did you see that sad stray dog?
>> Did you see the dog at the park? 

4.He will drive to his office right now.
>> Correct 

5.They ran to the school by hurry
>>  They run to school in a hurry. 

1.He walked over the bridge and takes a picture of himself.
>> He walked over the bridge and took pictures of himself. 

2.They walked through the door to get some supplies.
>> Correct 

3.He walked inside the house because the class was over.
>> Correct 

4.During field trip, they went to the museum and saw fossils
>> During the field trip, they went to the museum and saw fossils. 

5.They walked with their pet cat
>> Correct
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