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회원님의 영작문

The disadvnteges of having cats are;;
1#. they are very sencetive they don't like new things
2# . if they are sick it costs lots of money, so you cant buy everything
3#. we need to keep them clean.
4#. we need to find out many ways to help pets
5#. they are not toys we need to play only when they want to.
6#. if cats are angry don't talk or touch them for 15 muinits
7# they don't like us touching their tail feet and neck, but they like humans touching their tails front where the hip is
8#they are comfertable in high places
9# they have very quiet paws and good ears they don't like nosy sounds.
10# they are saying hi when they see you with their nose up high so you can touch their nose with your fingers when you want to say hi back

thank you🐈🐈‍⬛🐱

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It's impressive, Yu Ri! Thank you for your detailed and informative answers. Keep up the good work!-Faith-
The disadvnteges of having cats are;;
>> The disadvantages of having cats are:
1#. they are very sencetive they don't like new things
>> 1. They are very sensitive and they don't like new things.
2# . if they are sick it costs lots of money, so you cant buy everything
>> 2. If they are sick, it costs lots of money, so you can't buy everything.
3#. we need to keep them clean.
>> 3. We need to keep them clean.
4#. we need to find out many ways to help pets
>> 4. We need to find out many ways to help pets.
5#. they are not toys we need to play only when they want to.
>> 5. They are not toys so we need to play only when they want to.
6#. if cats are angry don't talk or touch them for 15 muinits
>> 6. If cats are angry, don't talk or touch them for 15 minutes.
7# they don't like us touching their tail feet and neck, but they like humans touching their tails front where the hip is
>> 7. They don't like us touching their tail, feet and neck, but they like humans touching their tails near their hips.
8#they are comfertable in high places
>> 8. They are comfortable in high places.
9# they have very quiet paws and good ears they don't like nosy sounds.
>> 9. They have very quiet paws and good ears and they don't like noisy sounds.
10# they are saying hi when they see you with their nose up high so you can touch their nose with your fingers when you want to say hi back
>> 10. They say 'hi' when they see you with their nose up so you can touch their nose with your fingers when you want to say 'hi' back.
thank you🐈🐈‍⬛🐱
>> Thank you!
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