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Why is it hard to stop a vice?

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2021-11-05 270

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Vice? Is your mean the electric cigarette?
Hum... This is my last thing of my life what I can deviate.
Haha.. See you soon.

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Hi there Benjamin!

Actually, I meant of what you think of why generally people have a hard time quitting on something. For example, some people find it hard to quit drinking because they have depression and want an escape. Moreover, some people cannot quit smoking because the people around them smoke a lot too.

Thus, there are various reasons why it is hard to stop a vice. Perhaps in your case is the feeling and sense of relaxation. Maybe you think that you also deserve a break for working hard. But then, these are only what I think. More importantly, if you enjoy something without harming anyone, then that's totally fine.

Thank you! See you soon. Happy weekend!

-T. Donna =)

Vice? Is your mean the electric cigarette?
>> Vice? Do you mean the electric cigarette?

Hum... This is my last thing of my life what I can deviate.
>> Hmmh... This is the last thing in my life that I can deviate.
 
Haha.. See you soon.
>> Correct!
Or:  Hahaha! See you soon.
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