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1. What musical instrument do you play?
I can play the piano.

2. Is it good for people to learn how to play musical instruments?
Learning an instrument is good for people.

1. Are you into classical music? If not, what kind of music do you like?
I like pop songs.

2. Describe the last concert that you went to.
I went to the last concert an exciting song came out.

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Hi Emma:)

Whose concert was it? :) 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

1. What musical instrument do you play?
I can play the piano.
>> CORRECT

2. Is it good for people to learn how to play musical instruments?
Learning an instrument is good for people.
>> Learning how to play an instrument is good for people. 

1. Are you into classical music? If not, what kind of music do you like?
I like pop songs.
>> CORRECT

2. Describe the last concert that you went to.
I went to the last concert an exciting song came out.
>> I went to that concert and an exciting song came out. 
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