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I think I'm just fine friend. It means lots of my friends think me that he(I) can offer many things to his friends, so he is a fine friend, but since he is not funny, therefore not a nice friend. If my friends think of me like this, I'll be satisfied.
2 days ago homework
In my opinion, schools don't have to have uniforms. I think students just have to wear neat clothes. However, we should give options to students. First is wearing uniforms and second is wearing freely. Then, students will be satisfied and happy.

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Hi, Daniel! Thank you trying to answer your homework. However, your ideas need more organization. Please keep on practicing.


I think I'm just fine friend.
>> I think I'm a good friend.

It means lots of my friends think me that he(I) can offer many things to his friends, so he is a fine friend, but since he is not funny, therefore not a nice friend.
>> My friends think that I can offer them many things, so I'm a good friend. However, I'm not funny, so I'm not fun to be with.

 If my friends think of me like this, I'll be satisfied.
>> This is a good sentence.



2 days ago homework
>> This is my answer to my homework two days ago.

In my opinion, schools don't have to have uniforms. 
>> This is a good sentence.

I think students just have to wear neat clothes.
>> This is a good sentence.

However, we should give options to students. 
>> This is a good sentence.

First is wearing uniforms and second is wearing freely.
>> The first option is they can wear uniforms, and the second option is they can wear whatever they want.

 Then, students will be satisfied and happy.
>> This is a good sentence.


You were able to use good expressions in this homework. Very good! Keep it up!


- Teacher Debbie

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