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How do you handle working with people who annoy you?

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In my previous job, there was a colleague who irritated me with his attitude. One of my team members hung up the call several times when receiving lousy feedback from clients. It was a critical issue since there were two Japanese speakers, so I needed to cover up the complaints. Since it is important to collaborate, I confronted the colleague about his actions. I used Google teams because in-person interaction was difficult due to COVID-19. From the open-minded conversation, I found out that the colleague had been undergoing a health issue, so it wasn't easy to be patient. Understanding the difficulties, I agreed to get the challenging calls transferred during the medication. Consequently, the colleague could recover the health, and I could satisfy customers. I believe being competitive together is essential in a customer service environment to assist clients in the fast-paced business environment. I would like to bring a collaborative and positive mindset to your company.

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Thanks for this Aciel!

In my previous job, there was a colleague who irritated me with his attitude. 
>>> correct   
One of my team members hung up the call several times when receiving lousy feedback from clients. 
>>> correct   
>>> OR: One of my team members hung up calls several times when receiving lousy feedback from clients.
It was a critical issue since there were two Japanese speakers, so I needed to cover up the complaints. 
>>> OR: It was a critical issue since there were only two Japanese speakers, I needed to cover up for the complaints.  
Since it is important to collaborate, I confronted the colleague about his actions. 
>>>  correct   
I used Google teams because in-person interaction was difficult due to COVID-19. 
>>> correct    
From the open-minded conversation, I found out that the colleague had been undergoing a health issue, so it wasn't easy to be patient. 
>>> correct   
Understanding the difficulties, I agreed to get the challenging calls transferred during the medication. 
>>> correct     
Consequently, the colleague could recover the health, and I could satisfy customers. 
>>> OR:  Consequently, the colleague could recover from poor health, and I could satisfy customers.  
I believe being competitive together is essential in a customer service environment to assist clients in the fast-paced business environment. 
>>> correct   
I would like to bring a collaborative and positive mindset to your company.
>>>  correct  

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