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My favorite book is .
Because I like cats very much and I want one.
and it is about cats and it's feelings .
I learnd that cats like high places and chainges their eye color when their happy or sad.
they hiss when they are angry and purr when they are happy or to calm down.

thank you ^^

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Hello, Yu Ri! I think you forgot to put the name of the book in the first sentence. Anyway, I just tried to put there some phrases to complete it. See you!-Faith-
My favorite book is . Because I like cats very much and I want one.
>> My favorite book is about cats because I like cats very much and I want one.
and it is about cats and it's feelings .
>> Aside from it's about cats, it also discusses its feelings.
I learnd that cats like high places and chainges their eye color when their happy or sad.
>> I learned that cats like high places and change their eye color when their happy or sad.
they hiss when they are angry and purr when they are happy or to calm down.

>> They hiss when they are angry and purr when they are happy or calming themselves.
thank you ^^
>> Thank you ^^
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