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담당 강사 님께서 ‘문법 오류 교정’ 과 ‘더 나은 영어식 표현’으로 교정해주는
서비스 입니다.

Pastor Report 1

작성자: 류*선
2021-11-09 336

회원님의 영작문

Worship: I have grown as a worship leader and preacher of the Word of God. It has been my privilege to administer the Sacrament of Holy Communion on the first Sunday of each month. I also officiated a wedding and infant baptism. I administered several funeral services. I set up new and creative worship services. Henderson UMC has provided online worship services every Sunday. It was a great opportunity to reach those who are new people and shut-ins.
Henderson UMC now has a screen and PowerPoint in the sanctuary during the worship service. Bible verses and lyrics of hymns are flashed on the screen for those who are having difficulties reading small letter pew Bibles and hymnals. Henderson recorded and send worship video links for those who were unable to attend due to covid 19 or mobility restriction.
Pastoral Visitation: In addition to visiting congregants in their homes, I have also made regular visits to nursing homes, hospitals, and workplaces.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Han! Good job! I have only made slight changes because most of your sentences are grammatically constructed and your word choice is good.-Faith-
Worship: I have grown as a worship leader and preacher of the Word of God. 
>> CORRECT
It has been my privilege to administer the Sacrament of Holy Communion on the first Sunday of each month. 
>> CORRECT
OR It has been my privilege to administer the Sacrament of Holy Communion every first Sunday of the month. 
I also officiated a wedding and infant baptism. 
>> CORRECT
I administered several funeral services. 
>> CORRECT
OR I administered several memorial service.
I set up new and creative worship services. 
>> CORRECT
OR I initiated/organized new and creative worship services. 
Henderson UMC has provided online worship services every Sunday. 
>> CORRECT
OR Henderson UMC conducts online worship services every Sunday. 
It was a great opportunity to reach those who are new people and shut-ins.
>> It was a great opportunity to reach new people and shut-ins.
Henderson UMC now has a screen and PowerPoint in the sanctuary during the worship service. 
>> CORRECT
OR A screen and PowerPoint in Henderson UMC are now available in the sanctuary during the worship service. 
Bible verses and lyrics of hymns are flashed on the screen for those who are having difficulties reading small letter pew Bibles and hymnals. 
>> Bible verses and lyrics of hymns are flashed on the screen for those who have difficulties reading small letters in pew Bibles and hymnals. 
Henderson recorded and send worship video links for those who were unable to attend due to covid 19 or mobility restriction.
>> Henderson recorded and sent worship video links to those who were unable to attend due to COVID-19 or mobility restrictions.
OR Henderson forwarded recorded worship video links to those who were unable to attend due to COVID-19 or mobility restrictions.
Pastoral Visitation: In addition to visiting congregants in their homes, I have also made regular visits to nursing homes, hospitals, and workplaces.
>> CORRECT
OR Pastoral Visitation: In addition to visiting congregants in their homes, I have also regularly paid visits to nursing homes, hospitals, and workplaces.
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