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영작교정 게시판

영어 말하기와 쓰기를 동시에 잡는다!

자신 있게 쓸 수 있는 영작문을 위해 파워잉글리쉬 수업을 수강하시는
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또는 강사님이 내주시는 과제를 회원님께서 영어로 작성해주시면,
담당 강사 님께서 ‘문법 오류 교정’ 과 ‘더 나은 영어식 표현’으로 교정해주는
서비스 입니다.

Pastor Report 2

작성자: 류*선
2021-11-09 183

회원님의 영작문

I also have emailed congregants’ prayer requests on a weekly basis. I have encouraged them to pray for our congregants, especially those who are in need and suffering from pain. I have provided the Lord’s Table for those who are spiritually needed. I have shared photos and videos of my visitation in online worship services as well as in-person worship services to make connections among the congregation.
I have sent birthday cards for all members to make them connected to the church.
Faith Development: I have delivered and taught Wesleyan theology through my sermons.
Mission and Service: I have helped the Happy Meal team from our congregation prepare meals and make visits to neighbors for their lunch meal service since I began serving at Henderson UMC. I have made a new church website and Facebook account to let people know about the ministry and mission program of Henderson UMC. New online platforms are a new way to connect with each other as a church.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

I am also blessed by your writings, Han! May God bless you and your work abundantly! -Faith-
I also have emailed congregants’ prayer requests on a weekly basis. 
>> I would also email congregants’ prayer requests on a weekly basis. 
I have encouraged them to pray for our congregants, especially those who are in need and suffering from pain. 
>> CORRECT
OR I have encouraged them to pray for our congregants, especially those who are in need and afflicted brethren. 
I have provided the Lord’s Table for those who are spiritually needed. 
>> I have provided the Lord’s Table for those who are spiritually needy. 
I have shared photos and videos of my visitation in online worship services as well as in-person worship services to make connections among the congregation.
>> I have shared photos and videos of my visitation in our online worship services as well as in our in-person worship services to make connections among the congregation.
I have sent birthday cards for all members to make them connected to the church.
>> I have sent birthday cards to all members to make them connected to the church.
Faith Development: I have delivered and taught Wesleyan theology through my sermons.
>> CORRECT
Mission and Service: I have helped the Happy Meal team from our congregation prepare meals and make visits to neighbors for their lunch meal service since I began serving at Henderson UMC. 
>> Mission and Service: I have helped the Happy Meal team, which is from our congregation, prepare meals and make visits to neighbors for their lunch meal service since I began serving at Henderson UMC. 
I have made a new church website and Facebook account to let people know about the ministry and mission program of Henderson UMC. 
>> I have made a new church website and Facebook account to let people know about the ministry and mission programs of Henderson UMC. 
New online platforms are a new way to connect with each other as a church.
>> CORRECT
OR We are bound together by these new online platforms.
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