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What would you do if you see a metal screw on your food as well?

작성자: 선*
2021-11-09 183

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I already experienced it this year. While I was eating fried chicken, I might chew strong bones. My tooth was broken and a small hole was made at the upper far behind teeth. In this case, it was not the store’s fault, but my fault, so I blamed myself for not being alert. It sounds funny, isn’t it? Whenever we eat food, we don’t inspect our food before putting it into our mouth like custom inspections at the airport. However, if I saw a metal screw on my food before eating it, I would take a picture of the screw, and complain it to the store. I will not ask them to make compensation for that. But if I got injured from the screw inside food such as teeth broken, gum bleeding, and etc., I would ask to compensate for a medical fee to cure the teeth including expecting damage in the future. Teeth are very essential parts of our long life, so we will suffer from damaged teeth for life. That’s why I can claim strongly to make it up for my damage. I hope the store owner has

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Ms. Jung!

Thank you for sharing your thoughts about this. I hope you'll have a great day today!

~T. Roanne ^_^
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I already experienced it this year. 
>> Correct! 
While I was eating fried chicken, I might chew strong bones.
>> Correct! 
My tooth was broken and a small hole was made at the upper far behind teeth. 
>> My tooth was broken and a small hole was made at the upper far behind the teeth. 
In this case, it was not the store’s fault, but my fault, so I blamed myself for not being alert. 
>> Correct! 
It sounds funny, isn’t it? 
>> Correct! 
Whenever we eat food, we don’t inspect our food before putting it into our mouth like custom inspections at the airport. 
>> Whenever we eat food, we don’t inspect our food before putting it into our mouth like customs inspections at the airport.
However, if I saw a metal screw on my food before eating it, I would take a picture of the screw, and complain it to the store. 
>> Correct! 
I will not ask them to make compensation for that. 
>> Correct! or I will not ask them to compensate for that.
But if I got injured from the screw inside food such as teeth broken, gum bleeding, and etc., I would ask to compensate for a medical fee to cure the teeth including expecting damage in the future. 
>> Correct! 
Teeth are very essential parts of our long life, so we will suffer from damaged teeth for life. 
>> Correct! 
That’s why I can claim strongly to make it up for my damage. 
>> Correct! 
I hope the store owner has 
>> (I'm not sure if this sentence is complete)
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