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Do you want to own a pet someday?

-->Yes, I think I want to own a cute pet someday. However, I feel sad to think about their death in advance.
If I live with a pet someday, they also would be our family. Their lifetime is shorter than humen, so we have to bear saying good-bye. I think I can not accept that situation. The reason being, I am not able to try having a pet right now.

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Hello Bo Im!

Owning a pet is a huge responsibility. Their passing is sad but then, if we cannot attend to them well, that is even worse. So, when one is ready, then by all means, this person may adopt or buy one.

In your country today, there is a total of 10 million pets. So, maybe, single people or more and more households are considering owning one. 

Well, thank you for this short and very substantial answer. The vocabulary used were very appropriate. In addition, the expressions of idioms are very good!

See you then!

-T. Donna =)

Yes, I think I want to own a cute pet someday. However, I feel sad to think about their death in advance.
>> Correct!
 

If I live with a pet someday, they also would be our family. 
>> Correct!

Their lifetime is shorter than humen, so we have to bear saying good-bye. 
>> Correct!
Or: humans

I think I can not accept that situation. 
>> Correct!

The reason being, I am not able to try having a pet right now.
>> Correct!
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