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What are your own small ways to reduce air pollution?

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2021-11-10 636

회원님의 영작문

First of all, I try not to use disposable items in everyday life, so I am looking for alternatives to cups, plastic bags, and so on. When we want plastic bags at the store, we need to pay for the bags, which are small, and also refundable in case you return them the next visit. You can buy plastic bags for waste, which can be used to throw away waste. So when I go shopping, I bring my own shopping bags to save money and not to use unnecessary plastic bags.
Secondly, I try not to have leftover food, so I take food as much as I can eat at one time. Before I eat food, I take out food in case it is too much to eat. If food is left too much, it can also be wasted. In addition, I think many people in the world are dying from hunger, so I feel guilty about leftover food.
Thirdly, I try to save water, so I use a cup to brush my teeth, block the basin to collect water to the sink, etc. This results in saving our environment.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Thank you for finishing your homework, Sun Jung! May we continue to save our environment. Stay safe!-Faith-
First of all, I try not to use disposable items in everyday life, so I am looking for alternatives to cups, plastic bags, and so on. 
>> CORRECT
When we want plastic bags at the store, we need to pay for the bags, which are small, and also refundable in case you return them the next visit. 
>> When we want plastic bags at a store, we need to pay for those, which are small and also refundable in case you return them the next visit. 
You can buy plastic bags for waste, which can be used to throw away waste. 
>> You can buy plastic bags for waste materials.
So when I go shopping, I bring my own shopping bags to save money and not to use unnecessary plastic bags.
>> CORRECT
OR So when I go shopping, I bring my own shopping bags to save money and to avoid adding irrelevant plastic bags.
Secondly, I try not to have leftover food, so I take food as much as I can eat at one time. 
>> Secondly, I try not to have leftover food, so I only take food that I can eat at one time. 
Before I eat food, I take out food in case it is too much to eat. 
>> CORRECT
If food is left too much, it can also be wasted. 
>> If there is too much food left, it can also be wasted. 
In addition, I think many people in the world are dying from hunger, so I feel guilty about leftover food.
>> In addition, I think many people in the world are dying from hunger, so I feel guilty about my leftover food.
Thirdly, I try to save water, so I use a cup to brush my teeth, block the basin to collect water to the sink, etc. 
>> Thirdly, I try to save water, so I use a cup to brush my teeth, block the sink to collect water, etc. 
This results in saving our environment.
>> CORRECT
OR It could save our Mother Earth.
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