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In your little way, how do you take care of the environment?

--> It is very important to protect our environment for next generation.
However, it is not easy to try it because of familiar convenience.
As my very little way, I do not use straw these days when I drink ice coffee everyday.
I am also trying not to eat delivery foods that causes a lot of plastic waste.

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Hello there Bo Im!

These are simple but very effective ways of doing our share to lessen the detrimental effects of man-made pollution to mother nature. The things that we do in a daily basis such as accumulating plastic or paper non-recyclables need to be controlled and that must start now.

The way we have made our lives comfortable have now escalated global warming. We do not have comfortable lives after all.

Well done on this homework. See you later.

-T. Donna =)

It is very important to protect our environment for next generation.
>>  It is very important to protect our environment for the next generation.

However, it is not easy to try it because of familiar convenience.
>> Correct!
Or: However, it is not easy to do it because of familiar practices or habits.

As my very little way, I do not use straw these days when I drink ice coffee everyday.
>> In my very little way, I do not use straw these days when I drink iced coffee.

I am also trying not to eat delivery foods that causes a lot of plastic waste.
>> I am also trying not to eat delivery food that causes a lot of plastic wastes.
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