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Saying thank you is very important. Saying thank you is basic manners. If someone gives you some things that you don't want, you have to thank you if that person gave you for good reasons.
Did you know why we rub our eyes when we are tired or sleepy? There is the scientific fact in it. When we are tired, hands and feet become warm. It's because our body saves our energy, so our bodies fall our body temperature. (I can't explain the more reasons in English.) Then, the tears in our bodies are decreased. So, we want to rub our eyes.

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Hi, Daniel! Thank you for doing your homework. You made good sentences.  Keep it up!

- Teacher Debbie

Saying thank you is very important.
>> This is a good sentence. 

Saying thank you is basic manners.
>>   This is a good sentence. 

If someone gives you some things that you don't want, you have to thank you if that person gave you for good reasons.
>> If someone gives you some things that you don't want, you have to thank him if he gave you those for good reasons.


Thank you for sharing this, Daniel.  Now I feel like rubbing my eyes.   

Diary:
Did you know why we rub our eyes when we are tired or sleepy?
>> This is a good sentence. 

There is the scientific fact in it. 
>> There is a scientific reason for it.

When we are tired, hands and feet become warm.
>> When we are tired, our hands and feet become warm.

It's because our body saves our energy, so our bodies fall our body temperature. 
>> It's because our bodies save energy by decreasing our body temperatures.

(I can't explain the more reasons in English.)
>> ( I can't explain the other reasons in English.)

Then, the tears in our bodies are decreased. 
>> Then tears in our eyes are decreased.

So, we want to rub our eyes.
>> This makes us want to rub our eyes.
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