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What I am proud of in our country's history is that we made Hangeul in the past. King Sejong studied for a long time and created a Hangeul to develop people and record history. Hangul is very scientific when you look into it, and it makes pronunciations or combinations that are difficult to express in English. I am proud of Hangul is a unique language used only in Korea around the world. Some countries that do not have any languages are trying to use Korean letter as their main language. However, sometimes we don't use English, so it's not good to study English separately like now.¤Ì¤Ì

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Hi Evan:)

I also heard that Hangeul is a very scientific language. It's actually quite fascinating. This language is very unique compared to other languages. :)  Thanks for sharing. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

What I am proud of in our country's history is that we made Hangeul in the past. 
>> What I am proud of in our country's history is that our ancestors made Hangeul in the past. 

King Sejong studied for a long time and created a Hangeul to develop people and record history. 
>> King Sejong studied for a long time and created Hangeul to develop people communication and record history. 

Hangul is very scientific when you look into it, and it makes pronunciations or combinations that are difficult to express in English. 
>> Hangul is very scientific when you look into it, and it makes pronunciations or combinations difficult to express in English. 

I am proud of Hangul is a unique language used only in Korea around the world. 
>>I am proud of Hangul because it is a unique language used only in Korea. 

Some countries that do not have any languages are trying to use Korean letter as their main language. 
>> Some countries that do not have any languages are trying to use Hangeul as their main language. 

However, sometimes we don't use English, so it's not good to study English separately like now.¤Ì¤Ì
>> However, sometimes we don't use English, so it's not good to study English separately like now.¤Ì¤Ì

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