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1. Is it easy for you to forgive your own mistakes?

It is difficult to forgive my own mistake. I tend to be stricter to myself than general. So once I made mistakes, I used to think about it until bedtime and even I dreamed about it. It occurs much stress, So I am trying to be nice and forgive myself.

2. If you are not able to forgive others, you carry the burden on you and hurt yourself. Do you agree?

I think so. Even though It doesn't apply to everyone. In my case, If I am not able to forgive something, I would dwell on that for a long time. In result, I hurt myself. It is painful. So I want to forgive other's fault as long as I can get it. And it is better to relationship.

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Good evening, Yu Jeong! 

Thank you for answering the homework questions. Please take note of the comments/ suggestions below: 

Question 1: Is it easy for you to forgive your own mistakes?

Your Answer: It is difficult to forgive my own mistake. I tend to be stricter to myself than general. So once I made mistakes, I used to think about it until bedtime and even I dreamed about it. It occurs much stress, So I am trying to be nice and forgive myself.

>> It is difficult for me to forgive my own mistakes. I tend to be stricter to myself in general. So once I made mistakes, I tend to think about it until bedtime and I even I dream about it. It gives me so much stress, so I am trying to be nicer and forgive myself.

Question 2. If you are not able to forgive others, you carry the burden on you and hurt yourself. Do you agree?

Your Answer: I think so. Even though It doesn't apply to everyone. In my case, If I am not able to forgive something, I would dwell on that for a long time. In result, I hurt myself. It is painful. So I want to forgive other's fault as long as I can get it. And it is better to relationship.

>> I think so, but maybe it doesn't apply to everyone. In my case, if I am not able to forgive something, I would dwell on that for a long time. As a result, I hurt myself. It is painful. So I want to forgive other's faults as long as I can get over it. Also, it is better for our relationships. 

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Great answers for the questions! :) I absolutely agree with your insights. 

See you later in class! 

~Miya^^
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