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I think, I don't have a problem with time control.
Because I usually move before 30 minutes ago.
If when I late a appointment, I'm feeling nervous and uneasy.
So If possible I trying to keep one's appointment study, work or everything.

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Hi there Ethan!

Balancing time is a must in a world where everyone needs to move. This applies to your country as manpower is the top resource that propels your economy. So, if you do not have a problem controlling your time, this means that you had a very good training. They say that the early bird catches the worm. It pays to prepare for appointments specially when it's for work.

Thank you very much for this homework! It's very good!

See you next week.

-T. Donna =)

I think, I don't have a problem with time control.
>> Correct!

Because I usually move before 30 minutes ago.
>> 
Because I usually move 30 minutes before.
Or: Because I usually move in 30 minutes before the set time.

If when I late a appointment, I'm feeling nervous and uneasy.
>> When I'm late in an appointment, I'm feeling nervous and uneasy.

So If possible I trying to keep one's appointment study, work or everything.
>> So if it's possible, I try to keep one's appointment and study, work, or everything.
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