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First, I will check my mailboxes if they receive or not. If they don't receive
my mails on signals, I repeatedly ask for them by my massages to answer
Otherwise, they don't answer my emails, so continuously resend him until
getting answering mails.

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Hi there again Jin!

Thank you so much for being able to write another homework. This is one patient way of waiting for answers from people who cannot answer quickly due to work or tight schedule. Anyway, read carefully my explanations as well as go over all of the suggestions below.

See you then!

-T. Donna =)

First, I will check my mailboxes if they receive or not. 
>>  First, I will check my mailbox if they received it or not. 
EXPLANATION: If you are talking about a mailbox, you don't have to add -es. Moreover, the pattern of "if" + pronoun + verb in past tense needs to be followed such that: "if she called her mother..."

If they don't receive
my mails on signals, I repeatedly ask for them by my massages to answer
>> If they don't receive my mails on signals, I would repeatedly ask them by my massages to answer.
EXPLANATION: We need to put "would" to show the proper patter of "if+ would or could". So, "If she will not go, I would not go too."
 
Otherwise, they don't answer my emails, so continuously resend him until
getting answering mails.
>> Otherwise, if they don't answer my emails, I would continuously resend it to them until
I get answers from the mails.
EXPLANATION: The same as the rule of "if+could/would" above, it should also be in this sentence. Moreover, you have to repeat the use of would on the sencond part of your sentence to have consistent grammar tense. 
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