¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

laws

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ±Ç*Èñ
2021-11-14 411

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

I don't like the way handle to accidents like this of president Moon.
Whenever big accidents or incidents occur in Korea, hr always instructed to make relevant laws or revise the provisions.
Utill now, it has been proved that his orders are useless or impractical.
They around him do only working on the table, having vain discussion or making useless laws.
After the president Moon took office, the laws and legal guidelines are very increased all of the social parts in Korea.
In my experience, harassment and bullying in the workplace cann't be solved by laws.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Good morning Ms. Lily! Thank you for expressing your thoughts in a written form. Enjoy the day:)
Aki :)
I don't like the way handle to accidents like this of president Moon.
>>> I don't like the way President Moon handle accidents.
Whenever big accidents or incidents occur in Korea, hr always instructed to make relevant laws or revise the provisions.
>>> Whenever there are big accidents or incidents occurring in Korea, He always instructs his subordinates to make relevant laws or revise the provisions.
Utill now, it has been proved that his orders are useless or impractical.
>>> Until now, it has been proven that his orders are useless or impractical.
They around him do only working on the table, having vain discussion or making useless laws.
>>> They go around him, only working on the table, having some vain and useless discussions and laws
After the president Moon took office, the laws and legal guidelines are very increased all of the social parts in Korea.
>>> After President Moon took over office, the laws and legal guidelines increase in all the social parts of Korea.
In my experience, harassment and bullying in the workplace cann't be solved by laws
>>> In my experience, harassment and bullying in the workplace can't be solved by laws alone.

¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
112510 Sorry for the last class ±è*Áö ¿Ï·á 2021-10-04 1
112509 10.04 homework ÀÓ*À± ¿Ï·á 2021-10-04 0
112508 Homework ±Ç*Áø ¿Ï·á 2021-10-04 419
112507 Way that I value other\'s time ±è*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2021-10-04 560
112506 Where do you go? ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2021-10-04 1
112505 How often do you go to the doctor? ÀÌ*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2021-10-04 564
112504 Homework ±è*À± ¿Ï·á 2021-10-04 452
112503 What kind of business do you think would be successful during... ¿©*Áø ¿Ï·á 2021-10-04 0
112502 Homework ÀÌ*¼± ¿Ï·á 2021-10-04 451
112501 HOMEWORK ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2021-10-04 383
112500 10.4 ±è*Áø ¿Ï·á 2021-10-04 2
112499 ¼÷Á¦ Á¤*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2021-10-04 699
112498 What souvenir from other countries do you bring back to Korea? ÀÌ*¶÷ ¿Ï·á 2021-10-04 2
112497 I will make more coll paper-build robot!! ¿À*°á ¿Ï·á 2021-10-04 456
112496 homework Á¤*È£ ¿Ï·á 2021-10-04 0
112495 My Homework °­*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2021-10-04 395
112494 Homework °­*¸² ¿Ï·á 2021-10-04 3
112493 Homework °­*¸² ¿Ï·á 2021-10-04 3
112492 If i could be reincarnated.. ¹Ú*Çù ¿Ï·á 2021-10-04 370
112491 Fill in the blanks ÀÌ*À± ¿Ï·á 2021-10-04 1085

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04