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Although I'm really busy, I need to rest because my body is become sick.
To have rest time, I make scheduler before the week.
When I write the scheduler, I have to make enough sleep time.
If I can't finish my work in time, I change from my sleep time to working time.
If I really busy and have to work or study too much, I wake up early.
Usually, I want to sleep late time. Waking up early is really emergency to me.
When I can't enough sleep, I'm sleepy every time. So I drink much coffee when I'm really busy.
Now, I'm not really busy because I don't have a job.
I have to practice English, and prepare to go abroad.
On second thought, there are a lot to do.
I'm going to make scheduler and I should restart busy life.

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Hello Kang!

Nice one for making this homework again!  I hope you won't forget the patterns you have learned as you get busy next year. ^^


-T. Maine


Although I'm really busy, I need to rest because my body is become sick.

>>Although I am really busy, I need to take some rest because my body is becoming sick.
 To have rest time, I make scheduler before the week.

>>I make a schedule before the week to make sure I have my rest time.
 When I write the scheduler, I have to make enough sleep time.

>>When I write my schedule, I have to take note that I get enough sleep.
 If I can't finish my work in time, I change from my sleep time to working time.

>>If I can't finish my work on time, I change my routine instead of sleeping.
 If I really busy and have to work or study too much, I wake up early.

>>If I am really busy and have to work or study, I wake up early.
 Usually, I want to sleep late time.

>>Usually I want to sleep late at night.

Waking up early is really emergency to me.

>>Waking up early only happens when there's something important I need to do.
 When I can't enough sleep, I'm sleepy every time.

>>When I can't get enough sleep, I feel sleepy every time. 

So I drink much coffee when I'm really busy.

>>So I drink much coffee when I'm really busy.
 Now, I'm not really busy because I don't have a job.

>>Correct.
 I have to practice English, and prepare to go abroad.

>>Correct.
 On second thought, there are a lot to do.

>>Correct. 

>>OR: There are a lot of things to do.
 I'm going to make scheduler and I should restart busy life.

>>I'm going to make my schedule and I should start having a busy life.


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