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Q:Can you buy something and get something for free in your country?
A:I think I only can get something free from my friends.
I think no one sells something for free, because the purpose of selling something is to earn some money.
So if they sell something for free, then they cannot earn money and it means that they failed to achieve their purpose.
Also it means that they suffer a loss, because they buy some things to sell, and they make the price more expensive so they earn money, but if they sell something for free, then they lose their money as much as the price of what they bought to sell.

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Hello Paul!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great¡¦ ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I think I only can get something free from my friends.

>> CORRECT!
I think no one sells something for free, because the purpose of selling something is to earn some money.

>> I think no one sells something for free because the purpose of selling something is to earn some money.
So if they sell something for free, then they cannot earn money and it means that they failed to achieve their purpose.

>> So if they sell something for free then they cannot earn money and it means that they failed to achieve their purpose.
Also it means that they suffer a loss, because they buy some things to sell, and they make the price more expensive so they earn money, 

>> Also it means that they will suffer a loss because they buy some things to sell and they make the price higher so they can earn money.

but if they sell something for free, then they lose their money as much as the price of what they bought to sell.

>> Hence, if they sell something for free then they lose their money as much as the price of what they paid for it.


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Hi Paul,

 

Great answer, it is true that if you sell something for free then it defeats the purpose of selling. That is not what I was asking though, I think you misunderstood the question. I was asking if you buy something, then do you get an additional item for free, it's like the buy one take one scheme that stores do or you buy an item then you get another item for free. Hope this helps you understand the question. ^^

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