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Honestly, I don't have any knowledge of politics.
And don't care about it.
I already know it's so bad thing to me.
But I think I'm so busy and can not feel interested in politics.
I'm so sorry about my answer.
It's really truly my answer.
I don't have any best politicion.

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Hi Ann:)

Don't feel sorry. I also don't know a lot of things about politics. Hahahaha!

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

Honestly, I don't have any knowledge of politics.
>> Honestly, I don't have any knowledge about politics. 

And don't care about it.
>> And I don't care about it. 

I already know it's so bad thing to me.
>> I already know that it's a bad thing to not know anything about it. 

But I think I'm so busy and can not feel interested in politics.
>> But I think it is because I am so busy and not interested in it. 

I'm so sorry about my answer.
>> CORRECT

It's really truly my answer.
>> I'm just being honest. 

I don't have any best politicion.
>> I don't have any best politician in mind. 
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