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When I'm with my family, The best thing that It's talking with each other. and, When I'm with my friends, The best things are too many. For example playing basketball, bowling, active things and drinking. Especially, I like to talk with my important people.

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When I'm with my family, The best thing that It's talking with each other. 
>> When I'm with my family, the best thing to do is talking with each other. 
and, When I'm with my friends, The best things are too many. 
>> However, when I'm with my friends, the best things to do are too many. 
For example playing basketball, bowling, active things and drinking. 
>> We usually do many activities or sports like playing basketball, bowling and drinking. 
Especially, I like to talk with my important people.
>> Most especially, I like to talk with my loved ones.
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