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What makes you afraid? Why?

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I'm afraid of a lot of things such as ghosts, snakes, rats, or to be alone, go home alone at dark night, etc. And the thing that worries me the most is having to do a presentation in front of a lot of people. I'm not sure why I'm usually nervous before a presentation and can't present fluently despite having meticulously prepared and practiced. I'm currently improving on it by practicing in front of the mirror and going to English speaking groups.

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Good evening, Yen Nhi!
I hope you'll overcome your fears soon! You can do it~

- T. Rina


1. I'm afraid of a lot of things such as ghosts, snakes, rats, or to be alone, go home alone at dark night, etc. 
>> I'm afraid of a lot of things such as ghosts, snakes, rats, or to be alone, go home alone at night, etc. 
OR: I'm afraid of a lot of things such as ghosts, snakes, rats, or to be alone, go home alone in the dark, etc. 

2. And the thing that worries me the most is having to do a presentation in front of a lot of people. 
>> CORRECT!

3. I'm not sure why I'm usually nervous before a presentation and can't present fluently despite having meticulously prepared and practiced. 
>> CORRECT!

4. I'm currently improving on it by practicing in front of the mirror and going to English speaking groups.
>> CORRECT!
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