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I think children should see that they are not violent and peaceful, and that they are not evil even if a villain comes out.
This is because if something violent comes out, the children will copy it and have a bad effect.

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Hello, Grace! Thank you for doing your homework. I agree that children like you shouldn't watch violent programs. You should watch movies and shows that teach moral lessons.  

- Teacher Debbie

I think children should see that they are not violent and peaceful, and that they are not evil even if a villain comes out.
>> I think parents should see to it that the shows are not violent, so that their children won't become bad like the villains.

This is because if something violent comes out, the children will copy it and have a bad effect.
>> This is because if something violent comes out, the children will copy it and have a bad effect to them.
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