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I think we can not go back to the before covid 19 pandemic.
We should live with virus.
Every don't know where is the virus and we can't avoid it.
Just people get the other advances in medical technology and get used to it.
But I really miss before that season.
Now I don't want to wear a mask.

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Hi Ann:)

Yes, that's true. We can't really guarantee that everything can go back to normal. All we need to do it be very cautious and practice good hygiene. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

I think we can not go back to the before covid 19 pandemic.
>> I think we can't go back to the way we did before the pandemic. 

We should live with virus.
>> We should live with the virus. 

Every don't know where is the virus and we can't avoid it.
>> No one doesn't know when and where we can get the virus so we can't really avoid it. 

Just people get the other advances in medical technology and get used to it.
>> Although people are advanced when it comes to medical technology so we should use it. 

But I really miss before that season.
>> Although I really miss how things were before. 

Now I don't want to wear a mask
>> I don't want to wear a mask anymore. 
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