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We call the president as "DonQuixote president" because fe falls into an illusion and his self world not real facts.

All of the policoes of this government, but they don't reflect and recognize their failure.

That's the worst prob;em.

They try to keep their power as a ruling party.

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Good day, Ms. Lily! Thank you for giving a response for our topic today. Have the enthusiasm with you always :)
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We call the president as "DonQuixote president" because fe falls into an illusion and his self world not real facts.
>>> We call the president "Don Quixote president" because he falls into an illusion and his word does not show facts.
>>> We call Mr. Moon Jae In "Don Quixote president" because he falls into an illusion and his word does not show facts.
All of the policoes of this government, but they don't reflect and recognize their failure.
>>> All of the policies of this government do not reflect and recognize their failure.
That's the worst prob;em.
>>> That's the worst problem.
They try to keep their power as a ruling party.
>>> They try to keep their power as the ruling party.
>>> They try to maintain their power being the Ruling Party.
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