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Q:Does your family have any special recipes that are passed down from generation to generation?
A:I think there's nothing like that, but my parents have their own special recipes, and I think our ancestors made Kimchi every winter, and we do it ,too.
One of my fathers' special recipe is chicken with Teriyaki Sauce, and one of my mothers' special recipe is spicy pork ribs with Kimchi .
Actually, many people in Korea make Kimchi every winter, so we make Kimchi every winter, too.

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Hello Paul!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great¡¦ ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I think there's nothing like that, but my parents have their own special recipes, 

>> I think there's nothing like that, but my parents have their own special recipes.

I think our ancestors made Kimchi every winter, and we do it ,too.

>> I think our ancestors made Kimchi every winter and we do too.
One of my fathers' special recipe is chicken with Teriyaki Sauce, and one of my mothers' special recipe is spicy pork ribs with Kimchi .

>>  One of my father's special recipes is Chicken with Teriyaki Sauce, and one of my mother's special recipes is Spicy Pork Ribs with Kimchi.
Actually, many people in Korea make Kimchi every winter, so we make Kimchi every winter, too.

>> Actually, many people in Korea make Kimchi every winter, so we make Kimchi every winter too.

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